Scarlet tears float
On a biting icy breeze
Drops of sorrow
Kiss soft hearts.
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A choir of angels
In a symphony of fate
Sing a hurricane of praise
In drifting desolation
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But I cannot make you love me.
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Desperate
My plea
To end
Autumns torment.
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Crumpled petals
Under my feet
Scattered
Golden leaves
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But I cannot make you love me.
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End this torment
Ruin me
Let me suffer
Winters chill.
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Written for Poetry Jam
Life From A Park Bench 
Beautiful wordings in this poem which conveys your feelings so very well. I like especially:
Crumpled petals
Under my feet
Scattered
Golden leaves
And the repetitions you used are very effective in deepening the feelings you express. Fine writing all around.
Here is my poem to this..hope you will visit. And thanks for linking with Poetry Jam.
http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2012/11/seasons.html
Lovely seasons poem and a really striking photo as well. The sentiment in this poem is so very real–the desire to get on to winter’s chill! Thanks for posting!!
Drops of sorrow kiss soft hearts…. Beautiful. But, I cannot make you love me. So true, love has to be given freely or, it’s never going to endure. This is sad, gentle, beautiful in imagery.
beautiful!
thank you so much for participating at Poetry Jam!
♥