Take a stroll with me
Through elegant Edwardian lanes
Slowly
Steadily
Hand in hand with each other.
———-
Let’s laugh together
Remember golden days
Always
Forever
When we tasted life’s pleasures.
———-
Time can be cruel
Plays tricks on the mind
Simple
Flowing
Tears outweighed with joy.
———-
Nothing can compare
To holding you close to me
Embracing
Thankful
We found true love.
———-
Written for Sunday Scribblings
I enjoyed this poem of love. It allowed me to do some reminiscing I suppose. Reading it over I read “outweighed by joy” but that is just me.
I really like the sound of the phrase “elegant Edwardian lanes.” It’s really quite beautiful. Nice take on rhythm, and pretty sound. :^)
Beautiful poem! Finding true love, it really is the ultimate life treasure. You wrote beautifully of hit here, could easily have been written for me and my beloved!
Beautifully gentle and compelling. Thank you.
I’m not sure if ‘the system’ ate my post or it has gone off for moderation. From memory I said something about loving teh gentleness of this poem.
Beautiful ❤