Touch me again
With your power
As you did
As you do
Ignite a reaction
Allow me to burn
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A caress charged with tenderness and beauty
Intimate desires awaken by a velvet kiss.
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I should have been warned
That there would be
No tomorrow.
As I fall
As I faint
Into your arms
Into your reflection
Captivated
Lost
Consumed.
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Written for Poetry Jam & Poets United
Life From A Park Bench 
to be consumed, is all i can think about after reading your piece.. beautifully written. 🙂
Lovely mood and word combinations in this. Such a strong mood piece I had to go back and decided if being consumed and having no tomorrow was a good thing or not! Lovely to be consumed like that though.
Sounds like a positive thing to me, Alan. I think everyone would enjoy falling like that, not caring about tomorrow, into someone’s arms (and heart).
An all consuming attraction… you conveyed it well. Nicely done, Alan. Glad you joined us at Verse First. This is a great offering.
Such passion in this poem. To be consumed like this, not caring about tomorrow would be
such a freeing experience. Beautifully done.
Captivated, lost, consumed … I would not have it any other way.
that is not a bad consuming now is it…and i like to think the no tomorrow in this is no tomorrow without the other person in this…i felt the descent in this…but as i said, in a very good way sir…smiles..
Alan,
Love and a heart, but perhaps a question of the longevity in mind…
Eileen
An ardent expression and passionate poem of love , riding high on the wave of ectasy, screams danger to me. Such surrender is magnificent which never comes without the down side which is hell.
To be in the moment like that is bliss.
…when we fell into such state of being too consumed for love sometimes we forget how love can be so quick to pass… but then maybe that’s the beauty in it… smiles… i enjoyed it…
flows very well and is very sensual
A love poem of immense proportions.
A great write, but that would scare me. I have Issues, hee hee.
Such simplicity and passion.
super charged
The title reflects that the moment is everything
Thank you all for your kind responses. I am very touched and am glad you liked it, It came from the heart and from hidden depths. 🙂
The motto of my blog has been “My heart envisions what my eyes refuse to see”. Words from the heart are as expressive as you can get. I’d say your heart has a great eye! Well done.
I specially like the opening verse, your passion rips through the lines ~
I love this! Resigned to feeling the burn of knowingly touching a flame.
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