No Tomorrow

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Touch me again

With your power

As you did

As you do

Ignite a reaction

Allow me to burn

 ———-

A caress charged with tenderness and beauty

Intimate desires awaken by a velvet kiss.

———

I should have been warned

That there would be

No tomorrow.

As I fall

As I faint

Into your arms

Into your reflection

Captivated

Lost

Consumed.

——–

Written for Poetry Jam & Poets United

 

 

 

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21 Responses to No Tomorrow

  1. abichica says:

    to be consumed, is all i can think about after reading your piece.. beautifully written. 🙂

  2. peggygoetz says:

    Lovely mood and word combinations in this. Such a strong mood piece I had to go back and decided if being consumed and having no tomorrow was a good thing or not! Lovely to be consumed like that though.

  3. Mary says:

    Sounds like a positive thing to me, Alan. I think everyone would enjoy falling like that, not caring about tomorrow, into someone’s arms (and heart).

  4. An all consuming attraction… you conveyed it well. Nicely done, Alan. Glad you joined us at Verse First. This is a great offering.

  5. Such passion in this poem. To be consumed like this, not caring about tomorrow would be
    such a freeing experience. Beautifully done.

  6. Helen Dehner says:

    Captivated, lost, consumed … I would not have it any other way.

  7. brian miller says:

    that is not a bad consuming now is it…and i like to think the no tomorrow in this is no tomorrow without the other person in this…i felt the descent in this…but as i said, in a very good way sir…smiles..

  8. Alan,

    Love and a heart, but perhaps a question of the longevity in mind…

    Eileen

  9. rallentanda says:

    An ardent expression and passionate poem of love , riding high on the wave of ectasy, screams danger to me. Such surrender is magnificent which never comes without the down side which is hell.

  10. Laurie Kolp says:

    To be in the moment like that is bliss.

  11. Kelvin S.M. says:

    …when we fell into such state of being too consumed for love sometimes we forget how love can be so quick to pass… but then maybe that’s the beauty in it… smiles… i enjoyed it…

  12. unevenstevencu says:

    flows very well and is very sensual

  13. A love poem of immense proportions.

  14. Sherry Marr says:

    A great write, but that would scare me. I have Issues, hee hee.

  15. Such simplicity and passion.

  16. leslie moon says:

    super charged
    The title reflects that the moment is everything

  17. alan1704 says:

    Thank you all for your kind responses. I am very touched and am glad you liked it, It came from the heart and from hidden depths. 🙂

  18. The motto of my blog has been “My heart envisions what my eyes refuse to see”. Words from the heart are as expressive as you can get. I’d say your heart has a great eye! Well done.

  19. Grace says:

    I specially like the opening verse, your passion rips through the lines ~

  20. aka_andrea says:

    I love this! Resigned to feeling the burn of knowingly touching a flame.

  21. Mr_Hoang says:

    I was looking for this certain info for a very long time. Thank you and best of luck

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