Place of glory
Paid with blood completely
New creation temple
Righteous holy dwelling place
Because of Christ
Mysterious union made radiant
His life authentic in me.
Written for Poets United – Authentic Life
Lovely and beautiful dedication to lord.
Your words are a commitment, a beautiful tribute,
A lovely spiritual write.
I like the way this looks on the page, almost as if the three pyramids represent father, son and holy spirit and then the last line is the single believer. Thanks for sharing.
What a fabulous reflection of Christ’s authenticity and the light emitted from faithful followers. So glad you shared.
So full of clarity and conviction.
In a way I envy you your absolute faith lighting your path through life.
This is very beautiful, and authentic, Alan! Well done.
This spoke to me in a deeply satisfying way. I think your last line is just perfect!
Meeting Rumi’s Beloved
Your words ring of true spiritual passion.
I loved the last line. Shows how deeply you connect with Him and what He means to you. Nicely expressed.
Beautiful song of faith, praise.
Connection to God beautifully portrayed. I also love the pattern of your poem . Thanks for visiting my blog.