Petals kiss the breeze
find shelter from the tempest
calm rest in heaven
this is a lovely tribute. so sorry to read about Dave’s passing.
a true farewell
Beautiful haiku Alan! I like the idea of finding shelter from the tempest.
I enjoy that you chose a haiku to express what we are all experiencing so succinctly. Beautiful.
Beautiful sentiments expressed, Alan!
i hope that he is now in that peace… one day maybe we will meet again… smiles…
That last line, beautiful ~ Thanks so much for sharing ~
lovely haiku…petals kiss the breeze…gorgeous. Nice tribute!
A beautiful good-bye.
Lovely thoughts Alan. Very nicely done haiku.
petals kissing the breeze… a beautiful image for the connection to this other dimension..
Lovely haiku Alan!
Beautifully said.
Haiku is such a great form to express loss. My thoughts go to Basho who wrote his own death poem
Sick on my journey, only my dreams will wander these desolate moors
I love this so much. It says it all. Perfectly.
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this is a lovely tribute. so sorry to read about Dave’s passing.
a true farewell
Beautiful haiku Alan! I like the idea of finding shelter from the tempest.
I enjoy that you chose a haiku to express what we are all experiencing so succinctly. Beautiful.
Beautiful sentiments expressed, Alan!
i hope that he is now in that peace…
one day maybe we will meet again…
smiles…
That last line, beautiful ~ Thanks so much for sharing ~
lovely haiku…petals kiss the breeze…gorgeous. Nice tribute!
A beautiful good-bye.
Lovely thoughts Alan. Very nicely done haiku.
petals kissing the breeze… a beautiful image for the connection to this other dimension..
Lovely haiku Alan!
Beautifully said.
Haiku is such a great form to express loss. My thoughts go to Basho who wrote his own death poem
Sick on my journey,
only my dreams will wander
these desolate moors
I love this so much. It says it all. Perfectly.