There was an old man who had a bin
and in it he chucked all of his sin
mistakes and failures
and a measure of doubt thrown in.
A Limerick written for Poetry Jam
So wonderful and I think we all have such trash ca.
now maybe if he had a match
he could burn them and be a free man…
I like this a lot, Alan. Really quite profound. I think it is human to doubt… but hopefully, as time goes on, it will disappear along with the sin!
Nice… we must learn something from that being.
Wonderful limerick Alan! I love that you took off with the limerick form and it says so much in few words. Flows well! Thanks
this is great! Now I need to toss a few into my bin. Have a great day!
The doubt makes one stop and think.
Clean and thought provoking. I wish it were so easy – just throwing everything in the bin!
Limerick with a bit of wisdom thrown in for good measure!
Terrific use of the metaphor for that bin ~ A meaningful one Alan ~
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