Colossal bronze cry
Swollen light aches dominate
Sip furious sky
Wow! Love the word pictures you painted with this Haiku. Your wording is incredible.
Vivid images well written,
Elizabeth http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2014/01/19/the-gift/
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Wow! Love the word pictures you painted with this Haiku. Your wording is incredible.
Vivid images well written,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2014/01/19/the-gift/