Half submerged
Nearly dissolved
Drowned future
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Drifting dreamily
Where time flows on the current
Lapping the banks of your grace
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Half submerged
Nearly dissolved
Drowned future
—–
Drifting dreamily
Where time flows on the current
Lapping the banks of your grace
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nice contrast between the two…the first one is quite heavy…the second gives a nice release in grace…
I agree with Brian. Each verse has a different feel, portrays a different message. Good to end on an ‘up’ note.