Haiku & Sedoka – Black

Half submerged

Nearly dissolved

Drowned future

—–

Drifting dreamily

Where time flows on the current

Lapping the banks of your grace

———–

Day Four – NaHaiWriMo

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2 Responses to Haiku & Sedoka – Black

  1. brian miller says:

    nice contrast between the two…the first one is quite heavy…the second gives a nice release in grace…

  2. Mary says:

    I agree with Brian. Each verse has a different feel, portrays a different message. Good to end on an ‘up’ note.

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