Home Run




Blazing into flames

In sudden shattering brightness

Disappearing into the sound of danger

Reaching past cheering whitebeams

Stealing the free light




Written for Poetry Jam

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10 Responses to Home Run

  1. Gabriella says:

    Great use of the form, Alan! I like how your poem suggests movements and energy.

  2. brian miller says:

    wow…nice energy and dramatic too alan…i am actually a defense fan, so i love to watch great pitching….

  3. Mary says:

    I can feel the energy in this poem, Alan. You have batted a home run with your words.

  4. Laurie Kolp says:

    I like the way this poem moves…

  5. wolfsrosebud says:

    i liked the power in this

  6. Poet Laundry says:

    Home runs are epic fun to watch! Nicely done.

  7. Wendy Bourke says:

    Epic strike! I am there.

  8. Wayne says:

    You hit this one out of the park….well done

  9. Sara v says:

    Alan, this is fabulous! What energy and excellent word choices. Love it 🙂

  10. You have captured that moment vividly with your words, Alan.

Thank you for reading my poems. Please don't feel you have to comment. I enjoyed writing them, I hope you enjoyed reading them, Be blessed.

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