Blazing into flames
In sudden shattering brightness
Disappearing into the sound of danger
Reaching past cheering whitebeams
Stealing the free light
Written for Poetry Jam
Great use of the form, Alan! I like how your poem suggests movements and energy.
wow…nice energy and dramatic too alan…i am actually a defense fan, so i love to watch great pitching….
I can feel the energy in this poem, Alan. You have batted a home run with your words.
I like the way this poem moves…
i liked the power in this
Home runs are epic fun to watch! Nicely done.
Epic strike! I am there.
You hit this one out of the park….well done
Alan, this is fabulous! What energy and excellent word choices. Love it 🙂
You have captured that moment vividly with your words, Alan.
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