Soar
Upwards
Blazing into flames
In sudden shattering brightness
Disappearing into the sound of danger
Reaching past cheering whitebeams
Stealing the free light
Epic
Strike
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Written for Poetry Jam
Soar
Upwards
Blazing into flames
In sudden shattering brightness
Disappearing into the sound of danger
Reaching past cheering whitebeams
Stealing the free light
Epic
Strike
——-
Written for Poetry Jam
Great use of the form, Alan! I like how your poem suggests movements and energy.
wow…nice energy and dramatic too alan…i am actually a defense fan, so i love to watch great pitching….
I can feel the energy in this poem, Alan. You have batted a home run with your words.
I like the way this poem moves…
i liked the power in this
Home runs are epic fun to watch! Nicely done.
Epic strike! I am there.
You hit this one out of the park….well done
Alan, this is fabulous! What energy and excellent word choices. Love it 🙂
You have captured that moment vividly with your words, Alan.