November

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Purple mist

Veils the lonely forest

Shades of bronze

Scattered forlorn leaves

Whisper winter’s secret.

 

Glowing golden love

Taste the scent of crimson

The silence of trust

For all is laid bare

Whisper winter’s secret.

 

Amber Ocean

Dancing beads of forgiveness

Curtain lonely fields

As psalms of desire

Whisper winter’s secret

 

——

Written for Poets United

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30 Responses to November

  1. Vandana says:

    Ah!! what a beautiful way to introduce winter , the coming season that will reign now!!

  2. It seems like you have a wonderful November.. So far we have had 2 hours of sun.

  3. Sumana Roy says:

    ah..you make us hear winter’s silent footsteps…beautiful Alan…

  4. When most of us are moaning about the onset of Winter, you make it sound so beautiful.

  5. The colors dance around this poem giving a distinct glow of beauty as winter approaches

  6. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    I think the Song of Solomon is a psalm of desire. (I love that phrase!) Thanks for visiting my blog. Enjoy the rest of your weekend…with grace!

  7. Mary says:

    Oftentimes winter’s secrets are buried in a blanket of white…..

  8. solid imagery.

    enjoyed the reading.

  9. Kerry O'Connor says:

    I really like your use of colour in this poem, Alan.

  10. Such beautiful imagery!!!!! All the beauty that whispers winter’s secrets.

  11. humbird says:

    It’s become the theme of poets seems never can guess the secrets of winter…smiles…love the ‘Glowing golden love

    Taste the scent of crimson’ and ‘forlorn leaves’ .
    The poem really paint the sacred state of November. Nice to hear it in a reading.

  12. oldegg says:

    There is both beauty and sadness in the approach of winter and you have captured that well here.

  13. Winter’s whisper in November showed itself here this weekend.

  14. Alan,

    Winter approaches and we must try to keep faith with the progress of nature. Better days ahead, we hope and new colours!!

    Eileen

  15. kaykuala h says:

    Great words to welcome winter. Contrary to feelings of sadness with the cold days ahead many are mentally prepared to take winter into their life! Great lines alan!

    Hank

  16. love how the poem flows and the images you used.

  17. dsnake1 says:

    there are so many pleasing colors in your poem. lovely! 🙂

  18. Gillena Cox says:

    lovely images

    thanks for stopping by my Sunday Lime, have a good week

    much love…

  19. Hi Alan, I could see the Autumnal leaves in your November like they are outside my window. How they seem to prophesy the coming freeze of winter. Good job! and thanks for the comment.

    jamztoma

  20. glmeisner says:

    What a set of images you used the combinations are great.

Thank you for reading my poems. Please don't feel you have to comment. I enjoyed writing them, I hope you enjoyed reading them, Be blessed.

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