Hands Of Time

ClockNearMidnight

Another day flies

Another written letter

Another scribbled note

Another hidden text

Another word of reassurance

Another whispered fear

Another hollow scream

Another dream shattered

Another poured out heart

Another hem to touch

Another promise never to leave

Another forgotten tear

Another forsaken tree

Another palm engraved

Another hand reaches out

Another new beginning

—-

Written for Poetry Jam

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19 Responses to Hands Of Time

  1. brian miller says:

    you def took us on the up and down journey of life…
    I like the other hem to touch…and the reference behind it…smiles.

  2. Grace says:

    This makes all the difference, another hand reaching out ~ May we always make full use of that time for another one ~

  3. peggygoetz says:

    Oh yes those hands of time do fly with all those things going on. Glad there is a hand reaching out as well–leaves the poem on a positive note.

  4. Gillena Cox says:

    Ah yes i too luv the ending, with that tone of continuing, like the gasp of a new day, thank you for dropping in at my blog, have a good Wednesday

    Much love…

  5. humbird says:

    So much for two important hands….

  6. Wendy Bourke says:

    Very creative take on the prompt, Alan. Your use of anaphora repetition throughout, imbues the piece with the monotone quality of a “list” which, when juxtaposed against the closing lines, is dramatic and uplifting.

  7. Mary says:

    The repetition in your poem works, Alan; and the hand reaching out definitely can inspire a new beginning.

  8. Laurie Kolp says:

    I really like this, Alan!

  9. Ramya says:

    Lovely poem,Alan! 🙂

  10. Gabriella says:

    Great use of repetition, Alan. I like how you create meaning and convey strength out of the ordinary.

  11. kaykuala h says:

    Another hand reaches out
    Another new beginning

    Great ending alan! I love poems that ends with a finality, better yet on a positive note in fact!

    Hank

  12. Alan,

    I enjoyed this journey through some of the trials and experiences life can thow at us. In all of the happenings, hands hoped to soothe and do the trick of helping..
    A realistic experience in well chosen words..

    Eileen

  13. No matter how low we feel sometimes, if we have a hand that reaches out to us we feel a lot better. Nice poem 🙂

  14. Vinitha says:

    Life covered well in here. Nicely worded.

  15. Truedessa says:

    I like the thought of a new beginning..it gives one a sense of hope.

  16. djtsmith says:

    Always another if we watch for the opening of the door.

  17. Meenal Sonal says:

    Very well presented and of course another brilliant work by you 🙂

  18. arathi says:

    another beginning is what gives hope to live another day…

  19. Nicholas V. says:

    It is good to leave behind us those things that we can no longer change or influence, and to try to move on and begin afresh, learning from past mistakes. Beautifully written, Alan.

Thank you for reading my poems. Please don't feel you have to comment. I enjoyed writing them, I hope you enjoyed reading them, Be blessed.

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