Autumn Eyes





in circles

as amber leaves

in drifts of cold rain

dance on the swirling breeze

I in crimson light will

look into your eyes

leave the future

to itself

and trust




Written for Poetry Jam

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13 Responses to Autumn Eyes

  1. peggygoetz says:

    Very creative approach to the prompt here. Love the images in this–dreams as amber autumn leaves dancing. Amber a perfect color for autumn leaves.

  2. Mary says:

    To trust in love & the future is a beautiful thing indeed! I enjoyed this one, Alan.

  3. kaykuala h says:

    Creating a connection of falling leaves to falling in love is perfect Alan. More so in the Fall. It creates a perfect time of the year. Love this!


  4. This is beautiful, Alan!

  5. Helen says:

    Oh Alan … this produced chills, and a few sighs. Lovely.

  6. brian miller says:

    that is the best way to live…not in fear or too much anxiety about what it to come…but in the comfort of trust….

  7. Gabriella says:

    This is a favorite of yours, Alan. I like the trust and love I read in your words, Alan. They are the best way to live.

  8. Sumana Roy says:

    “… trust


    love.”…the key to peaceful living….

  9. Anita says:

    Yes, love will triumph for such an honest person 🙂
    Best wishes!

  10. Absolutely the best thing to trust in Trust in love

  11. Suzy says:

    So simple yet deep. Gave me the feeling of being lost in love. Lovely.

  12. eyes never lie and we can search trust in them , nicely written

    Lost In Her Eyes

  13. jammy7000 says:

    How beautiful, Alan! I think this is my favourite of yours of all I’ve read…

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