as amber leaves
in drifts of cold rain
dance on the swirling breeze
I in crimson light will
look into your eyes
leave the future
Written for Poetry Jam
Very creative approach to the prompt here. Love the images in this–dreams as amber autumn leaves dancing. Amber a perfect color for autumn leaves.
To trust in love & the future is a beautiful thing indeed! I enjoyed this one, Alan.
Creating a connection of falling leaves to falling in love is perfect Alan. More so in the Fall. It creates a perfect time of the year. Love this!
This is beautiful, Alan!
Oh Alan … this produced chills, and a few sighs. Lovely.
that is the best way to live…not in fear or too much anxiety about what it to come…but in the comfort of trust….
This is a favorite of yours, Alan. I like the trust and love I read in your words, Alan. They are the best way to live.
love.”…the key to peaceful living….
Yes, love will triumph for such an honest person 🙂
Absolutely the best thing to trust in Trust in love
So simple yet deep. Gave me the feeling of being lost in love. Lovely.
eyes never lie and we can search trust in them , nicely written
Lost In Her Eyes
How beautiful, Alan! I think this is my favourite of yours of all I’ve read…
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