I used to go to work every morning by nine
Packed lunch in my rucksack
Mobile in my pocket
Both there to keep me connected.
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After my daily journey
Up and down the same road
I would wonder about the challenges of life
About chances not taken
Paths not walked
And contemplate where I was headed.
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I followed by heart
I forgot my head
I lost my curiosity
Left behind all my security
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Followed a dream
Listened to a quiet whisper
—
Took the first step
Out of the boat
And walked on the water.
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Written for Poetry Jam
Life From A Park Bench 
Ah, this has definitely been quite a year for you! It is never too late to make a change…..I am glad you realized that, didn’t stay stuck in your former path, and are working toward your new goal. I like the last stanza especially…about leaving the boat and walking on water!
I like this Alan. Good description of one of those turning points in life. I know you have moved in the past year or so–did this start you on a new path as well? I like the image of you walking on water!
Alan, this is my favorite of yours. I like the idea of listening ‘ to a quiet whisper’ and how you used biblical imagery to talk about yourself.
that’s so much courageous and inspiring Alan…it’s good to surprise ourselves at one bend of our life and move on…and definitely only heart to follow….love the close…
Alan,
i really enjoyed reading this poem, as reminded me of the change of direction we took as a family, when leaving our previous home, schools, friends and employments, to move from Northern Ireland, to England;an unknown step, which required bravery, just like your decision Alan. An excellent poem for the prompt..
Eileen
Alan, I loved the poem! Simple,elegant and powerful! It is kind of what I am going through right now….
Great close. I’m also a commute composer.
Such a cute poem it is.. Loved it totally..!!!
stepping out into new ventures takes a lot of strength
much love…
Listening to light whispers is key to happiness, words beautifully knitted in poem. Loved it 🙂
Wow! Wonderful! How I wish we could all let go of things that really dont matter and take that first step to follow our dreams!
Oh, Alan! What a wonderful last line! Your poem describes so well a similar decision I took a couple of years ago and which changed my life for the better!