Desire’s pure flame
Sweet scented perfume of delight
Desire’s pure flame
Fragrant aroma kisses my shame
Love’s promise forever burns bright
Darkness dispelled in radiant light
Desire’s pure flame
—–
Written for Poetry Jam
Desire’s pure flame
Sweet scented perfume of delight
Desire’s pure flame
Fragrant aroma kisses my shame
Love’s promise forever burns bright
Darkness dispelled in radiant light
Desire’s pure flame
—–
Written for Poetry Jam
“Love’s promise forever burns bright”…a beautiful truth
I like love’s promise burning bright as well. Such a promise (love) really does dispel the darkness of life…
have to agree luv that promise
have a good Wednesday
much love…
Very nice Alan. I like how you used the sense of smell as well as the visual images here. Thanks for the prompt too.
Alan,
I love the goodness that comes from being beside a candle light. This is as with your poetic words; delightful.
Excellent prompt!
Eileen
Excellent prompt and heartfelt poem, gave me a great sense of peace. Thank you 🙂
“Love’s promise forever burns bright” – I am with Sumana here. This is the most powerful light in this touching poem.
A very heart-warming poem indeed! Exquisite work 😀
This one touches all the senses….Awesomely put!
Delicious sense of romance filtered by threads of discomfort. A rich banquet for the senses.
A perfect structure for this poem! Sensually lovely!
A very sensual poem, Alan, appealing very much to the senses! Lovely.
Desire a pure flame, what a lovely phrase.