Power leaves the core
scatters you to the margins
as all the birds cry.
Written for A Haiku A Day
Fills me with sadness to think of the birds crying. A vivid picture.
I agree with Mary… a vivid picture. Well-crafted.
Thank you for stopping by my blog
there’s a certain power in these words, how the birds react to the elements.
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