Thunder

Power leaves the core

scatters you to the margins

as all the birds cry.

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Written for A Haiku A Day

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4 Responses to Thunder

  1. Mary says:

    Fills me with sadness to think of the birds crying. A vivid picture.

  2. howanxious says:

    I agree with Mary… a vivid picture. Well-crafted.
    -HA

  3. Gillena Cox says:

    Thank you for stopping by my blog

    much love…

  4. dsnake1 says:

    there’s a certain power in these words, how the birds react to the elements.

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