Flame

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Desire’s pure flame

Sweet scented perfume of delight

Desire’s pure flame

Fragrant aroma kisses my shame

Love’s promise forever burns bright

Darkness dispelled in radiant light

Desire’s pure flame

—–

Written for Poetry Jam

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13 Responses to Flame

  1. Sumana Roy says:

    “Love’s promise forever burns bright”…a beautiful truth

  2. Mary says:

    I like love’s promise burning bright as well. Such a promise (love) really does dispel the darkness of life…

  3. Gillena Cox says:

    have to agree luv that promise

    have a good Wednesday

    much love…

  4. peggygoetz says:

    Very nice Alan. I like how you used the sense of smell as well as the visual images here. Thanks for the prompt too.

  5. Alan,

    I love the goodness that comes from being beside a candle light. This is as with your poetic words; delightful.
    Excellent prompt!

    Eileen

  6. tsdwords says:

    Excellent prompt and heartfelt poem, gave me a great sense of peace. Thank you 🙂

  7. Gabriella says:

    “Love’s promise forever burns bright” – I am with Sumana here. This is the most powerful light in this touching poem.

  8. Sanaa says:

    A very heart-warming poem indeed! Exquisite work 😀

  9. Susmit says:

    This one touches all the senses….Awesomely put!

  10. Delicious sense of romance filtered by threads of discomfort. A rich banquet for the senses.

  11. maryannpotter says:

    A perfect structure for this poem! Sensually lovely!

  12. jammy7000 says:

    A very sensual poem, Alan, appealing very much to the senses! Lovely.

  13. Desire a pure flame, what a lovely phrase.

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