In a weak chain of concealment
Matters squared with your fraught conscious
Especially when you consider the years
That held each fragile repentant silence.
To allow yourself to accept forgiveness
As the hand grasps every hint of commitment
Consider every silent act of repercussion
And cling to each moment of reassurance.
For with the gift comes personal humiliation
You never bargain for all encompassing comfort
As you receive the grace you have encountered
And kiss the silence of flourishing endurance.
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Written for Poetry Jam
to allow yourself to accept forgiveness….that is sometimes the hardest step….
endurance, to run the good race, to keep up the fight and press on…it takes those moments of silence…
well we must let endurance flourish
“….the years / That held each fragile repentant silence.”…a painful existence indeed until “allow yourself to accept forgiveness”….life is like razor’s edge on which to walk….
I do think a person has to allow themselves to accept forgiveness as well as to forgive others. I am not sure what you mean by personal humiliation. Are you saying with the gift of reassurance comes personal humiliation? I don’t experience personal humiliation in my belief system, so I am wondering. Thought-provoking, Alan.
I do not think grace entails pain. I think of gratefulness and acceptance.
For sure one must embrace and be thankful for flourishing endurance. Good prompt this week. Thanks.
“you never bargain for all encompassing comfort”… but what a gift.
“kiss the silence” … we do need to learn to do that more.
Alan,
I like the contemplation and something of the contrition involved. Those emotions both require silence, to simply reward the soul… Excellent Alan.
Eileen
beautiful lines..loved the closure..so much to contemplate on..
Repentance and grace — truth here. God sees, of course, our “weak chain of concealment.” We can’t live with that. But we can live fully with His forgiveness.
My goodness, I enjoyed this!
thats a lovely take on “silence”. Somehow acceptance and forgiveness seem to be the hardest things to do!!!
Silence is about pain. Silence is about calmness.
Silence is also about forgiveness, about letting go. Very different and very positive…
We really need to learn to Accept, Endure, and if those can be done in a Silent way….Brilliantly put!!
So much truth in these lines!
so much truth here very nice poem
A wonderful reflective poem, Alan. How easy it is in relationships, in our daily interactions in society to lash out and speak acidly, when often silence allows grace…